HOPE YALL LIKE IT!!!!!!
Thursday, July 3, 2008 - 17:28
HOPE YALL LIKE IT!!!!!!
It's called Give me a chance
give me a chance to show you how much I love you i know that your unsure because so many people have played your heart but my love for you is for real only if you give me a chance I would show you how it feels to be loved please give me a chance to show you how it feels to be truly happy and everytime I see you sad my heart breaks because while your giving all your heart out the person is there cheating on you when i see you like that i feel like walking up to you to tell you that im here no one else can hurt you but I can't because you don't see me as i see you you only see me as a friend and i see you as someone special for me my heart cries more because i can't have you here with me to tell you that I love you and hug me tight but i can't because you wont' open your heart for me nor anyone else i don't care what you do or how you do it but all i need is for you to give me a chance to show you that i love you..
guys tell me if yall like it can you pleez rate it from 1-10
thanx
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she wear that dress on her concert in germany last saturday, watch out my youTube profile to see her performances =) www.youtube.com/Jaaaannis
Jordin is the best ♪♫
~Jannis
aww those words are so sweet
I would suggest you add commas and periods where they should be so that it would make more sense 
I would give it a 8 for now, but if you correct the mistakes in it, i would give it a 9 or 9 1/2 
If you need help correcting, dont hesitate to ask! ^_^
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WOW, that's pretty gud Monkdy! I'll give it a 8 1/2.
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Abandoned to Jesus,
~*Danielle(Dani)*~
"Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways acknowledge Him and He will direct your paths." ~Proverbs 3:5-6